Comments on: Winter Wonders, Chapter 2 http://pattysgallery.com/wordpress/2007/12/05/winter-wonders-chapter-2/ Creative writing, original art and musing, spanking, erotica Thu, 17 May 2012 21:38:24 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.0.4 by: pattydraws http://pattysgallery.com/wordpress/2007/12/05/winter-wonders-chapter-2/#comment-10445 Wed, 12 Dec 2007 01:40:52 +0000 http://pattysgallery.com/wordpress/2007/12/05/winter-wonders-chapter-2/#comment-10445 Thank you <b>R</b> hope you're enjoying the holiday season. LOL <b>Amanda</b> it is being published, here on this blog. Part of it was up on the woodshed. When it's done, all of it will be here. Thanks for popping in <b>Danielle</b> a writer can never get enough encouraging words. You're sweet <b>George</b>. Thanks for pointing out that chapter 1 was not intuitively accessible. I'll try to remember to link previous chapters with each new post. Thank you <b>Mickey</b> every writer's got their own style. I like a real and plausible story and while I like lots of spankings in them, one of the hardest things to do is make them seem natural. I also like it when I come across good stories with spanking in them rather than a spanking scene framed by a recipe scenario. I like trying to write characters that readers can like and identify with, and I really like it if I am successful making the settings and situations feel alive for readers. Thanks for the encouraging feedback y'all Love patty Thank you R hope you’re enjoying the holiday season.

LOL Amanda it is being published, here on this blog. Part of it was up on the woodshed. When it’s done, all of it will be here.

Thanks for popping in Danielle a writer can never get enough encouraging words.

You’re sweet George. Thanks for pointing out that chapter 1 was not intuitively accessible. I’ll try to remember to link previous chapters with each new post.

Thank you Mickey every writer’s got their own style. I like a real and plausible story and while I like lots of spankings in them, one of the hardest things to do is make them seem natural. I also like it when I come across good stories with spanking in them rather than a spanking scene framed by a recipe scenario. I like trying to write characters that readers can like and identify with, and I really like it if I am successful making the settings and situations feel alive for readers.

Thanks for the encouraging feedback y’all

Love
patty

]]> by: Mickey http://pattysgallery.com/wordpress/2007/12/05/winter-wonders-chapter-2/#comment-10375 Sun, 09 Dec 2007 22:31:23 +0000 http://pattysgallery.com/wordpress/2007/12/05/winter-wonders-chapter-2/#comment-10375 Patty, I love a story with fleshed out characters and a plot that rings true. The time it takes to write a story like this must be enormous. I agree with the previous comments that your work should be published, I don't know how you would go about it but I could be worth your while to look into it.I am looking forward to more chapters of this story as soon as you can get them done. Thanks for all the care you take with this story and the time you spend getting it right. Awesome! Mickey Patty,
I love a story with fleshed out characters and a plot that rings true. The time it takes to write a story like this must be enormous. I agree with the previous comments that your work should be published, I don’t know how you would go about it but I could be worth your while to look into it.I am looking forward to more chapters of this story as soon as you can get them done. Thanks for all the care you take with this story and the time you spend getting it right. Awesome!
Mickey

]]> by: George http://pattysgallery.com/wordpress/2007/12/05/winter-wonders-chapter-2/#comment-10345 Sat, 08 Dec 2007 18:55:43 +0000 http://pattysgallery.com/wordpress/2007/12/05/winter-wonders-chapter-2/#comment-10345 I agree wholeheartedly with the above. I don't know yet that this is better than "No Going Back" and "Firewatch", but it seems to be at least in the same class..and they are GOOD. You should look for a publisher! Naturally, I read chapter 2 first, all the time wondering where chapter 1 was. Then I found it. DUMMY! I agree with the others in my admiration of your character development. It/they are all good stories that keep the reader's attention, and have spankings inserted at the appropriate spots, they are not spanking driven. The spankings are natural occurrences within the plots. Patty, we love you! Get well! write! Post! Publish! And thank you so much for sharing your incredible talent with us. George I agree wholeheartedly with the above. I don’t know yet that this is better than “No Going Back” and “Firewatch”, but it seems to be at least in the same class..and they are GOOD. You should look for a publisher!

Naturally, I read chapter 2 first, all the time wondering where chapter 1 was. Then I found it. DUMMY! I agree with the others in my admiration of your character development. It/they are all good stories that keep the reader’s attention, and have spankings inserted at the appropriate spots, they are not spanking driven. The spankings are natural occurrences within the plots.

Patty, we love you! Get well! write! Post! Publish! And thank you so much for sharing your incredible talent with us.
George

]]> by: Danielle http://pattysgallery.com/wordpress/2007/12/05/winter-wonders-chapter-2/#comment-10327 Fri, 07 Dec 2007 20:08:42 +0000 http://pattysgallery.com/wordpress/2007/12/05/winter-wonders-chapter-2/#comment-10327 I can't think of something new to add.. I agree with the above commenters. Thanks Patty. I can’t think of something new to add.. I agree with the above commenters. Thanks Patty.

]]> by: Amanda http://pattysgallery.com/wordpress/2007/12/05/winter-wonders-chapter-2/#comment-10322 Fri, 07 Dec 2007 15:28:58 +0000 http://pattysgallery.com/wordpress/2007/12/05/winter-wonders-chapter-2/#comment-10322 I also think you have something worthy of publishing here. This story reminds me of the romance novels from before 1980...you know, the ones that often included spanking? The story is lovely. Thank you for it. I also think you have something worthy of publishing here. This story reminds me of the romance novels from before 1980…you know, the ones that often included spanking?

The story is lovely. Thank you for it.

]]> by: R http://pattysgallery.com/wordpress/2007/12/05/winter-wonders-chapter-2/#comment-10313 Fri, 07 Dec 2007 05:06:41 +0000 http://pattysgallery.com/wordpress/2007/12/05/winter-wonders-chapter-2/#comment-10313 Patty, I love what you are doing with the characters. You are not merely telling the story, you are creating individuals that are "coming to life" right before our eyes. Your talent never fails to impress me. Walk in Peace, R Patty,

I love what you are doing with the characters. You are not merely telling the story, you are creating individuals that are “coming to life” right before our eyes. Your talent never fails to impress me.

Walk in Peace,

R

]]> by: pattydraws http://pattysgallery.com/wordpress/2007/12/05/winter-wonders-chapter-2/#comment-10308 Fri, 07 Dec 2007 01:03:27 +0000 http://pattysgallery.com/wordpress/2007/12/05/winter-wonders-chapter-2/#comment-10308 Awwwwww you two (<b>Paul & Jeff</b>). You make me blush, smile & eager to make sure that I flesh out Chapters 8 - 10 with the utmost care for you. Mary is an important character also. Her voice becomes essential to what unfolds as you will see. Awwwwww you two (Paul & Jeff). You make me blush, smile & eager to make sure that I flesh out Chapters 8 - 10 with the utmost care for you. Mary is an important character also. Her voice becomes essential to what unfolds as you will see.

]]> by: jeff http://pattysgallery.com/wordpress/2007/12/05/winter-wonders-chapter-2/#comment-10303 Thu, 06 Dec 2007 21:26:45 +0000 http://pattysgallery.com/wordpress/2007/12/05/winter-wonders-chapter-2/#comment-10303 I second Paul's post.This is a story worthy of a Remington painting for a cover and a book bin of your own at the book store.There is so much more going on than in ordinary spanking stories,Patty.The characters are not stereotypical and the plot hooks at the very start.All good stories have those qualities.This one is a classic being unveiled before our eyes. I second Paul’s post.This is a story worthy of a Remington painting for a cover and a book bin of your own at the book store.There is so much more going on than in ordinary spanking stories,Patty.The characters are not stereotypical and the plot hooks at the very start.All good stories have those qualities.This one is a classic being unveiled before our eyes.

]]> by: Paul http://pattysgallery.com/wordpress/2007/12/05/winter-wonders-chapter-2/#comment-10293 Thu, 06 Dec 2007 12:54:54 +0000 http://pattysgallery.com/wordpress/2007/12/05/winter-wonders-chapter-2/#comment-10293 Patty dear one, I certainly didn't expect to see chapter two so quickly. :) I think that I've read everything that you have written, in this or in CSW. ;) This has to be the best so far. :) Your characterisation of both Roy and Connie is brilliant, they live in my head. :) I have to agree with Jeff, you are so much better than many published authors. :) I'm not going to say hurry and post the rest this is so good it's worth waiting for. Thank you dear girl, I love it. :) Love and warm hugs, :) :) :) Paul. Patty dear one, I certainly didn’t expect to see chapter two so quickly. :)
I think that I’ve read everything that you have written, in this or in CSW. ;)
This has to be the best so far. :)
Your characterisation of both Roy and Connie is brilliant, they live in my head. :)
I have to agree with Jeff, you are so much better than many published authors. :)
I’m not going to say hurry and post the rest this is so good it’s worth waiting for.
Thank you dear girl, I love it. :)
Love and warm hugs,
:) :) :)
Paul.

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